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Birthday, fic and question

aaniren, happy birthday!!!!! I hope you’re having a wonderful day, sweetie, make the guys at office buy a big chocolate cake to celebrate it!! Wish you joy, happiness, money and naked cellulloid boys having fun together to bring a bright smile on your face!!!!
Now part of your gift... lockdown fic is written!!! It’s a world record for me, I started it yesterday and it’s already done. In fact it’s only handwritten, now I’ll have to find enough time to type it and then 1) re-write it again and again until it barely looks like my original idea, 2) re-write it again and again until I can’t stand it anymore and post it or 3) re-write it again and again until my eyes and fingers are hurting, then I’ll post it. Anyway I’m posting part of it right now, as I said it’s a gift to you – it’s unbetaed, so all grammar mistakes are mine.

"I love you, Chris", I whisper.
"I know, Toby."

This is my first coherent sentence after some time. We’re smiling at each other, like teenargers do when they’re living their first love. Bunk’s a mess, we’re not clean yet but none of us cares about it. His eyes are shining and it’s a beautiful thing. I think he’s happy. It’s good to make someone happy, specially after all hate I’d delivered him last year. It’s over now, replaced by a stronger emotion.
I hold him, resting my head under his chin, listening his heartbeats. They say, "To-bee, To-bee, To-bee..." He caress my hair, sighing in it.
I’m happy. There’s nothing more I want. Not tonight. Not at all.

Did you like it? Hope so! All for you, girl, all for you... ;o)

Now I’ve a question to all Oz dudes at my flist: Beecher thinks about Schillinger during this fic, and I need to know how he would refer to him. Would he call him Nazi sadist or scumbag? Can you give me more suggestions?


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May. 19th, 2005 07:53 pm (UTC)
listening his heartbeats. They say, "To-bee, To-bee, To-bee..."

Oh, this is beautiful. *sniffle*
May. 19th, 2005 11:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks, sweetie! I hope you'll like the rest of story when I finally post it! ;o)
May. 19th, 2005 07:54 pm (UTC)
Is there more to it or???

I think Nazi fuck or scumbag would work nicely.
May. 19th, 2005 11:22 pm (UTC)
There's much more, Rifka, it's just part of the end of story! I'd already typed it, it's time to re-write paragraphs, add last-minute ideas and so on. Thanks for your suggestions, they'll be used!
May. 19th, 2005 11:27 pm (UTC)
After I wrote that, I thought how awful of me and I hated to imply anything negative.

I'm so glad there's more. It's been a long time since I've read one of your fics.
May. 19th, 2005 11:36 pm (UTC)
I must have lost it, because I didn't find anything negative *g*

Well, you'll read two fics - this and the Lyric Wheel one, which is supposed to be a sequel. I'd started to write it but probably it'll take me more than two days to be a reasonable story, LOL
May. 20th, 2005 07:38 pm (UTC)
Hummmm... I was thinking... well, I need a beta to this baby - do you have enough time for it? ;o)
May. 20th, 2005 10:11 pm (UTC)
I just sent you email!!
May. 21st, 2005 10:14 pm (UTC)
I've read it!
May. 20th, 2005 12:43 pm (UTC)
Nazi fuck

Oh! I was gonna pick that one. :)
May. 20th, 2005 07:38 pm (UTC)
It'll be used, I'm sure of that! ;o)
May. 20th, 2005 07:35 am (UTC)
OMG!! I LOVE it, Adriana - to the point when I'm teary-eyed!! Thank you for this wonderfully wonderful present (I'm incoherent with all the excitement LoL) - I can't wait to read the rest!!

Wish you joy, happiness, money and naked cellulloid boys having fun together to bring a bright smile on your face!!!!
See, that's what I call "good wishes" :D Thank you *hugs*
May. 20th, 2005 07:40 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you'd liked it, girl!!! I've been living with this story in my mind for months, you know that, it seems it was waiting your birthday to really come to life, LOL - I hope you'll like the rest of it!
May. 21st, 2005 12:57 pm (UTC)
No doubt about it ;) I can't wait!
May. 22nd, 2005 10:43 pm (UTC)
Calling from Lisbon. I started this week my LJ, all the hard work was done by a lady from the western deserts ( I'm sure you'll guess who ).

Two fics, one of them a lockdown fic ! I can't ask for more.

I'll friend you, as soon as I know how.
May. 23rd, 2005 01:15 am (UTC)
You're here, sweetie!! I'm glad you decided to start your own LJ, it's very addictive, as you'll soon discover, LOL
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